Kamis, 10 Maret 2011

Sonnet (2 shakespearean 2 petrarchans) The joy of light

Shakespearan Sonnets:

1st shakspearan sonnet

What love is

Everbody needs love in they're lives
Because it's important and needed
If you don't succeed just try
You will never know it
It is valuable and real
And hate is not good
You will be good and you feel
I know you could
It will actually be a big of a deal
If you try to be kind
Say nice things and feel surreal
So don't try to read my mind
We need to love everyone
So it will be peace and have fun

2nd shakespearean sonnet

Fairest Love (2nd )

From the fairest creature we decided to increase,
That thereby beauty's rose might never die,
But as the riper should time by decease
His tender heir might bear his memory
But thou contracted to love his fair love
Being in love where he always lies
Thyself thy foe, to thy sweet self too cruel
Thou that love is now the world's fresh ornament
And only the sweetest poison
Within thine own the bud of fairest love
And also the complicatest
And also the fairest
Is the fairest love


Explanation: This theme of the poem is about love in the world. Everybody needs to love one another, and I think that is really important for us. If there isn't love the world will just be sad. I chose this poem because I think love means a lot to me and to a lot of people too. So that's the reason why I chose that theme. I made this because I think the topic is interesting and also I like to read and write poems about love.


Explanation: This poem is different from my first shakespearan poem because this is about the opposite which is heartbroken. I chose this theme because for me it is easy to make sad poems, and not only happy ones. This sonnet is about somebody losing a close person like a friend, or family member and that person is expressing his/her feelings about they're loss.
Why I choose this theme?
Because, I am quite bored if i wrote the poems which is always happy. And I don't want it if its always a happy poem. So I just make one sad poem in this sonnet.

Petrarchan:

1st petrarchan sonnet

The happiness and joyfulness of light

Where art thou fair maiden of shining light?
Show thy face and wave thine wand of magic
Unless thou art not- this will be tragic!
Secluded out of sight during my plight;
Why hideth when thy touch can cure all pain
Shadows of darkness covering the moon
Revealeth thy self-or this will be gloom!
Heareth this solemn voice waxing and wane;
Alas my love, you have withered my pain
Your sparkling love pusheth night's darkness by
Heart smiling, head raiseth without a cry:
Thy soft touch filleth my heart with sweet poison:
Scales gone sweet love appeareth in my sight
With the sun shine-I beholdeth thy light!







2nd petrarchan sonnet

My light of joyness in my soul

When I consider my light of joyness in my soul is spent,
My days in this darkness would be bright and wide,
And one sadness which has forever died and has hide
Me using less, my soul has bent

To serve therewith my happiness and present
I have found my way of happiness
And my heart and soul has been filled with joyfulness
And I found my right high way, my old high way should be prevented



Explanation about the theme:
This petrarchan sonnet is about happiness and joyfulness of the light. It explains about happiness like there's no sadness in this world and its always happy and ends with happy endings.
Why I choose this theme??
Because I like it if the world is always ending with happy endings like in fairytales (actually its possible that the world can end in a happy ending if everything's peaceful and good) And also besides, I also want it to make it as a petrarchan sonnet because it's also interesting to me and also the back have the same end (ex: sight, light) and also both of my petrarchan's sonnet will have the topic "happiness" (because I don't want to always make it about nature and too much love anymore. It's boring if the theme's always like that)

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