Selasa, 01 Maret 2011

English poem assessment (haiku)

English Poem Assessment   (Haiku (6) )


Theme: Nature

1ST haiku


Title: Earth

Home of the livings                                                               (5 syllables)
Wonderful place to enjoy                                                    (7 syllables)
Nice and peaceful earth                                                        (5 syllables)

2nd haiku


Title: Starry night in the sky

 Stars in the night sky                                                           (5 syllables)
 Shinning bright in the night skies                                        (7 syllables)
 Bright and beautiful                                                            (5 syllables)

3th haiku

Title:  Sunlight

The sunlight is bright                                                               (5 syllables)
So bright in the afternoon                                                        (7 syllables)
I can hardly see                                                                       (5 syllables)

  4th  haiku

Title: Autumn

Autumn came so fast                                                         (5 syllables)                   
Before I can say goodbye                                                 (7 syllables)
To the warm summer                                                        (5 syllables)



5th haiku

Title: Cold winter night

Cold and freezing night                                                          (5 syllables)
Makes me cold and shivering                                                 (7 syllables)
I don’t like winters                                                                  (5 syllables)


6th haiku

Title: Spring

Spring has came at last                                                                     (5 syllables)
Goodbye to the cold winter                                                             (7 syllables)
Flowers bloom in the spring                                                           (5 syllables)



Explanation about the theme:

The theme is about nature. And also the 1st haiku is about the earth first (its like the introduction like what earth is and its a wonderful place to live and enjoy) and also then from starry night, sunlight  and then the season changes into autumn, winter then spring. Its like the haiku is explaining  the seasons in order and step by step (from summer, autumn, winter then spring) and you tell how you feel about them in this form of haiku.

Why I choose this theme?
Why I choose this theme?? Because I think it's also interesting to make haiku about the nature. You get this idea from how they happen and also how you feel about them. I also have no idea when I want to make this haiku and what should it be about. And I got the idea to make the theme nature and I find it easy to make this haiku because I write and tell how i feel about Summer, autumn, winter, spring and starry sky.
I also find  it interesting to make this haiku about nature. I enjoy doing this work. And I also love the nature.

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